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the real telephone works very much like this tin
can-and-string phone but of course it does a lot better the tin can-and-string
phone sends sounds as vibrations while the real telephone sends sounds as
electrical signals these signals can travel long distances with the help of
wires these distances are much larger than those which the vibrations of the
tin can-and-string telephone can cover when you speak you make sound waves and
these sound waves go into the transmitter of your telephone these sound waves
change into electrical signals which go to the other receiver and are there
changed again into sound that's how we can talk to each other on the telephone
Solution
The real
telephone works very much like this tin can-and-string phone**,** but of
course**,** it does a lot better**.** The tin can-and-string phone sends sounds
as vibrations**,** while the real telephone sends sounds as electrical
signals**.** These signals can travel long distances with the help of
wires**.** These distances are much larger than those which the vibrations of
the tin can-and-string telephone can cover**.**
When you
speak**,** you make sound waves**,** and these sound waves go into the
transmitter of your telephone**.** These sound waves change into electrical
signals**,** which go to the other receiver and are there changed again into
sound**.** That's how we can talk to each other on the telephone.